The Evidence on Teaching

Evidence on the Effectiveness of Comprehensive Error Correction in Second Language Writing

Van Beuningen CG, De Jong NH, Kuiken F · 2012

grade Cquasi-experimentindependentmixed
Sample
268
Population
Multilingual secondary-school pupils in Dutch classrooms writing in L2 Dutch - the youngest substantial sample in the written-corrective-feedback literature, and still adolescents rather than children
Design
The strongest positive test of whether error correction transfers out of the corrected text and into new writing. Four conditions: direct comprehensive correction, indirect comprehensive correction, and two active control groups - self-editing without feedback, and additional writing practice without feedback. Having "more writing practice" as a control arm is what makes this study unusually informative, because it tests the opportunity-cost objection directly. Outcomes measured on revision of the corrected text AND on new texts written at posttest and delayed posttest (1 and 4 weeks later), with grammatical and non-grammatical error types analysed separately. Recorded from the published abstract. Population caveat: L2 Dutch in secondary school - nothing here licenses a claim about a native-speaking six-year-old.
Key findings
Both direct and indirect comprehensive corrective feedback improved accuracy over self-editing without feedback AND over extra writing practice without feedback, "and this was true not only during revision but also in new pieces of writing" at 1 and 4 weeks. The error-type decomposition is the part that matters for a conventions topic: "only direct CF resulted in grammatical accuracy gains in new writing" while "pupils' NONGRAMMATICAL accuracy benefited most from INDIRECT CF" - the non-grammatical category being the one closest to mechanics. Correction did not make pupils write more simply: structural complexity and lexical diversity in new writing were unaffected, which falsifies the avoidance objection. The authors read the whole pattern as support for comprehensive correction as a durable teaching tool rather than a proofreading service.
Genetic confound
Low. Pupils were allocated to four instructional conditions and every arm wrote and revised, so the contrast is between what the teacher did with the text, not between children who write and children who do not.

Effects

OutcomeMetricValueMeasureTimingVsHorizonClass
Written accuracy in NEW pieces of writing after comprehensive error correctiongroup comparison against self-editing and against extra writing practiceboth direct and indirect CF superior at posttest and at 4-week delayed posttest (no pooled effect size in the abstract)researcher-designedposttest and 4-week delayed posttestactive-alternativeunder-1yrdomain-skill
Non-grammatical (mechanics-adjacent) accuracy in new writingerror-type decompositionbenefited most from INDIRECT correction (errors flagged, not fixed)researcher-designedposttest and delayed posttestactive-alternativeunder-1yrdomain-skill
Structural complexity and lexical diversity in new writing (the avoidance hypothesis)group comparisonno simplification attributable to correctionresearcher-designedposttestactive-alternativeend-of-treatmentdomain-skill

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